Thursday, July 25, 2013

Ghost of Yesterday




Disturbed.
Feels like I’ve been used.
Deranged.
Alone, lost and confused.


Feared.
Paranoid as it can be
Obsessed.
Once heard her “sorry”.


Haunted.
By the ghost of yesterday
Slaved.
By every word she says.


The word that has been abused
Is the word I always long to hear.
Numbed with the excuses
Blinded by the unknown fear.


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10 comments:

  1. zeimayaJuly 25, 2013 at 7:03 PM

    reading it remind me of a song A GHOST OF YOU ng michael learns to rock. ganda naman ng tula nakakaiyak.

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  2. Senyor IskwaterJuly 26, 2013 at 1:31 AM

    Ooooohhh... so dark naman ng tulang ito Sir! Cge ilabas mo lang...

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  3. joeyveluntaJuly 26, 2013 at 1:53 PM

    mga bagay na kinatatakutan ko:

    1. Multo ng kahapon
    2. Inggles

    Nyahahahaha

    Pero teka bakit ganito? Anong meron?

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    1. limarx214July 29, 2013 at 8:28 AM

      merong pagtataksil na naganap, hahaha.
      kathang-fiction lang ito sir!

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    2. joeyveluntaJuly 30, 2013 at 5:44 PM

      hahahaha ang pinakamainam na na bagay na natutunan ko sa pagsusulat, "fiction". Hahahaha
      Example:
      Sya: Uy ayus to ah mukhang may pinaghuhugutan.
      Ako: Fiction lang yan.

      On a serious note, gusto ko yung pagtatalik dito ng mga salita ang galing ng pagkakasalansan :D

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    3. limarx214July 31, 2013 at 1:36 PM

      Perks, benefits, advantage (kahit anong itawag pwede) talaga ng writer/blogger ang itago sa ibang katauhan o kanyang katha ang kanyang saloobin. Napakadali para sa atin na sabihing fiction o non-fiction ang sinulat pero sa bandang huli, ang nagsulat lang din ang nakakaalam kung hinango niya ito sa tunay na buhay o hinugot mula sa malikhaing isip.

      Talagang "pagtatalik" ang ginamit mong wording haha, salamat sir Joey. Mamayang gabi "makikipagtalik" ako sa susunod kong isusulat pero sigurado tagalog ulit, mahirap na baka ma-police grammar,haha.

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  4. Ms. LeehJuly 26, 2013 at 4:30 PM

    emo ka ah .. ayos yan .. ilabas sa paggawa ng tula ang mga nakakatakot na pakiramdam ..

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  5. JH AlmsJuly 27, 2013 at 9:22 AM

    lapatan na natin ng music 'to, dre.. pwede, eh.. hehehe

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  6. sasaliwngawitJuly 29, 2013 at 1:05 PM

    like. :)

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